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Her eyes tell stories
That her mouth dare not
If you would care to look
Even just to glance
Those eyes would be found more red
than the blood that seeps from her open wounds.
She cries now
For what? She doesn’t know.
She doesn’t care.
Right now all she cares about is you.
She screams now
For what? For pain?
For something to break the silence
That leaves her alone with only thoughts of you?
She doesn’t care.
She doesn’t know.
All she knows is you.
She loves now.
She opens up.
For what? For a chance at happiness?
She doesn’t know.
She doesn’t care.
All she cares about is you.
She’s crying again.
She does this too often.
She wishes she could smile again,
A true smile
One that only comes at even thoughts of you.
Her fingers shake now,
As she slowly types all her feelings into words.
Stupid words that will never even come close to truly expressing how she really feels.
Her hands continue to shake as she confesses her love
But is this all in vain?
She doesn’t care.
She doesn’t know.
All she knows is she loves you.
©2006-2010 ~Smirnoffalicious
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:iconmartynne:
AWW thats so sweet. That also proves that love is OCD. But it's still very sweet and well written. Well all of your stuff is well written. But it's still very good. And i'm shuting up now.

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In the beginning, the Universe was created. This made a lot of people angry, and has been widely regarded as a bad idea.

-The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galexy
:iconsmirnoffalicious:
lol thanks merve :hug: i need a hug

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She hides her secrets in her eyes
:iconmartynne:
YAY u get a hug :hug::hug::hug:

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In the beginning, the Universe was created. This made a lot of people angry, and has been widely regarded as a bad idea.

-The Hitchhikers Guide to the Galexy
:icongothicluva:
cool poem it reminds me of sumthin......

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Y have u forsaken me in ur eyes,thoughts and hearts leavin me 2 drown in a pool of my depression.....


R<3K... 4eva
:iconsmirnoffalicious:
yeh...wat might that be?

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She hides her secrets in her eyes
:iconbatswatter:
Heart-wrenching and well written. And it may or may not help that I can relate to every word. Good work, Alia.

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The demi-gods and hungry ghosts of God,
God knows I'm not at home.
:icondeisel89:
lol. why does this describe me perfectly???? lol. i love this. def. a fav :hug:

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if you are looking for the guilty, you need only look in the mirror
:iconsmirnoffalicious:
thank u very much :hug:

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She hides her secrets in her eyes
:iconsmirnoffalicious:
thank u..and i think it might describe alot of ppl perfectly

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She hides her secrets in her eyes

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